our audience feedback

The first comment about the build up is valid as we needed to add more tension to the scene and therefore make it seem more dramatic and therefore bends more to the conventions of a action thriller. We can also see that throughout the audience feedback a problem with hearing the narration was a problem therefore we could use this as a way to build tension and help the story line be explained more and then get more people intrigued with what the film is going to be like. Another point which was made in the audience feedback was the use of fast paced editing could have been better and therefore could have created a better emphasis on the action in the trailer. Another point made which was made was the clear point that it did have a action side to the film. The audience feedback shows that the use of titles was good and could also be improved depending on how we wanted the trailer to come out. Overall from the feedback we can see that  the target audience of young people can then be interested but we could use more conventional improvements to be more engaging like improving the narration.